I see the visions
of indian braves
dancing round the fire
calling their ancestors down
To bring back the world
to when they was young
No war
No pain
No white man cheat
Just peace and love
and the indian way
this poem mays me think peace... good job :)
Time when life was not complicated...governance was easy...and the simple meaning of honor and dignity were the basal of human existence...
A hattak vpi homma sia. Chahta siiahoki! Good poem, although to be 100% honest with you, words like brave and maiden are a bit outdated and somewhat resented...too many folks coming to our reservations and addressing us as brave, maid, squaw, chief, etc. The word warrior might work as a good substitute, no real negative connotations there and that's how we refer to our veterans of both past and present. I hope you don't mind me posting this as public because my aim is to inform and not embarrass. Still, I really liked the poem and gave it a 10. :)
A great write, as always..hehe....I do so enjoy your works...they bring so much to mind. I live in Indian Territory and see first hand the effects of European occupation in the NEW world...but...I see the effects of Americanism first hand also....blessings
Heartiest thanks for the Indian way.there may be a lot of lacuna in our Indian Society; yet there are some outstanding matters which are to be followed by the world. with kindest regards ramesh rai
I like the fact that you write about this subject. You've painted a clear picture and I could just imagine the whole scenario. Very good poem. To peace and the Indian way...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The Brave Dave waves amaze in my face! that was cool for calling all spirit in human...i will try to learn how Indian rise for higher place, again short and nice Dave! _Unwritten Soul