Luwi Habte

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The Instant - Poem by Luwi Habte

It seems to be flattering
And sometimes heart felt appreciation
But it helps a lot in addition
It supports the mind of creation

For real, I am not that appointee
That never can be my guarantee
I can do in well through
Because I believe your supports helps a lot too

With the adorable controversy
Letting me enthusiasm with poetry
You guys repair and make all my ambitions
Am not reluctant to obey your advice about art stations

Dedicated to my pen friend simon
And my eldest brother samson


Comments about The Instant by Luwi Habte

  • Afzal Shauq (4/30/2010 10:24:00 AM)

    its raelly a good poem that you wrote for your pen friend.. lovely is this..loved it 10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • Silent Speaker (4/27/2010 12:30:00 PM)

    a very deep poem. well written. (Report)Reply

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  • Kendyll Brown (4/24/2010 8:42:00 PM)

    that was a good heart felt poem. i think your friend an brothr appreciate it
    - kendyll
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  • Lynn Glover (4/24/2010 7:56:00 PM)

    Your friend Simon and brother Samson should be flattered by your words. A good work. Lynn (Report)Reply

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  • Max Saysoff (4/24/2010 4:41:00 PM)

    a true poem must come from the heart and i thank you heart is sweet and gentle even if you don't show it sometimes =) (Report)Reply

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  • Dominique Lange (4/24/2010 4:38:00 PM)

    you are very good writer am loving poems (Report)Reply

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  • D H (4/24/2010 3:41:00 PM)

    ooo deication poem, favorite poems are the ones made for a reason. Awesome poem (Report)Reply

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (4/24/2010 3:05:00 PM)

    dedication poems r fun to read....well the good dedications r x)
    this i likes too^-^
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  • Claire Hunter (4/23/2010 1:41:00 PM)

    great poem, i enjoyed reading it 10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • Crusnik Vampy -Samantha Micnheimer (4/23/2010 10:31:00 AM)

    great writting very enjoyable. (Report)Reply

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  • Simon Tewolde (4/22/2010 2:46:00 PM)

    We love you Sweet Dear Luwi! ! !
    You are a blessing to me.
    May God bless you with long and healthy years so that you will grow up in to the deep core depth of Poetry and make a History.

    No, It is never Flattering.......It is not like me to say something against my real feelings for the sake of saying it. So it is my heart depth appreciation.
    Keep on writing.
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  • Daniel GoncalvesDaniel Goncalves (4/22/2010 2:29:00 PM)

    nice poem It was enjoyable :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 9, 2010


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