The Instant Poem by Luwi Habte

The Instant

Rating: 4.8


It seems to be flattering
And sometimes heart felt appreciation
But it helps a lot in addition
It supports the mind of creation

For real, I am not that appointee
That never can be my guarantee
I can do in well through
Because I believe your supports helps a lot too

With the adorable controversy
Letting me enthusiasm with poetry
You guys repair and make all my ambitions
Am not reluctant to obey your advice about art stations

Dedicated to my pen friend simon
And my eldest brother samson

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Goncalves 22 April 2010

nice poem It was enjoyable :)

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Simon Tewolde 22 April 2010

We love you Sweet Dear Luwi! ! ! You are a blessing to me. May God bless you with long and healthy years so that you will grow up in to the deep core depth of Poetry and make a History. No, It is never Flattering.......It is not like me to say something against my real feelings for the sake of saying it. So it is my heart depth appreciation. Keep on writing.

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great writting very enjoyable.

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Claire Hunter 23 April 2010

great poem, i enjoyed reading it 10/10

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Iron Panda 23™ 24 April 2010

dedication poems r fun to read....well the good dedications r x) this i likes too^-^

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Afzal Shauq 30 April 2010

its raelly a good poem that you wrote for your pen friend.. lovely is this..loved it 10/10

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Silent Speaker 27 April 2010

a very deep poem. well written.

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Kendyll Brown 24 April 2010

that was a good heart felt poem. i think your friend an brothr appreciate it - kendyll

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Lynn Glover 24 April 2010

Your friend Simon and brother Samson should be flattered by your words. A good work. Lynn

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Max Saysoff 24 April 2010

a true poem must come from the heart and i thank you heart is sweet and gentle even if you don't show it sometimes =)

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