The Journey Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

The Journey

Rating: 5.0


Birth launches the journey to death.
Make precious the moments in between
Like a lapidary enriches gemstones

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is very short. Every effort should be taken reach a target that is eternal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 19 April 2022

Beautiful expression. What is between birth and death is what matters most.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2022

Great wisdom in such a succint poem. Poet Nair, I feel like I'm making up for lost time. Your poem has put things in proper perspective. Thank you very much.

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Thanks a lot Richard. I am really happy to see your comments after a long time.Hope everything is ok with you

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Bri Edwards 26 April 2022

I'd have skipped the 'launch' if I'd had any say in the decision! A nice poem, if one agrees with it. I do not believe in 'a target which is eternal'; I'm not sure what that means anyway. Life is sometimes too LONG, and the ending is often not a 'happy' one. : ( bri : )

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Thank you Bri. Launch has a meaning 'to start'. Death is sure. But none is concentrating on death. Everybody is toiling to achieve something great, not death.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 April 2022

So true. We should cherish the gem of life.5 stars.

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Thank you dear friend. We human beings are supposed to enrich our lives

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2022

I repeat sir, this is a great poem!

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Thank you very much dear Dr.Dillip. We must be aware of the ephemerality of life and should make use of every moment to brighten it with worthy deeds. Thank you again

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2022

Why half day? We can only work at best 12 hours out of 24 hours

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