The Journey Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

The Journey

Rating: 5.0

Birth launches the journey to death.
Make precious the moments in between
Like a lapidary enriches gemstones

Life is very short. Every effort should be taken reach a target that is eternal
Savita Tyagi 19 April 2022

Beautiful expression. What is between birth and death is what matters most.

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Anjandev Roy 02 January 2023

Fine it.....thanks for sharing....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 January 2023

Birth launches the journey to death.....yes, I can think of the two distinct points! The former is visible but the latter is invisible but a point that every person is destined to meet, there is no escape to it. Nothing can I say. I wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2023.

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With a lot of good thoughts about you I am wishing you a more splendid and abundant life ahead. As regards the journey of life we should consider ourselves very lucky to have been selected to undergo both pain and peace. The happiness after a sad time is like a sun that shines after the eclipse

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2022

Great wisdom in such a succint poem. Poet Nair, I feel like I'm making up for lost time. Your poem has put things in proper perspective. Thank you very much.

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Thanks a lot Richard. I am really happy to see your comments after a long time.Hope everything is ok with you

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Bri Edwards 26 April 2022

I'd have skipped the 'launch' if I'd had any say in the decision! A nice poem, if one agrees with it. I do not believe in 'a target which is eternal'; I'm not sure what that means anyway. Life is sometimes too LONG, and the ending is often not a 'happy' one. : ( bri : )

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Thank you Bri. Launch has a meaning 'to start'. Death is sure. But none is concentrating on death. Everybody is toiling to achieve something great, not death.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 April 2022

So true. We should cherish the gem of life.5 stars.

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Thank you dear friend. We human beings are supposed to enrich our lives

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