The Last Ride Together-(Ii) Poem by Shahzia Batool

Beautiful write Shahzia. Very heartfelt and poignant.

The tone of the entire poem it set in the first line itself. Though we don't want to part yet destiny plays its part. If we cannot fight destiny why regret then. It is a wonderfully crafted poem.:

It's a match to your urdu poem! & it's cool!

My favorite poem is Robert Browning's Last Ride Together.My fav lines- - -Take back the hope you gave I claim/oOnly the memory of the same.I don't know how many times I read that poem. Your poem is superb with same intensity.

one of the greatest betrayals of all time.the poet brings the reader to a world of fantasy which seems more like real aspire..........wow

it's always the way of life... once the purpose is served, things begin to fall apart! well written...

Wow! I can feel the warmth and the longing of a heart in this poem. Very beautiful. I loved the way you ended the poem. I loved it. I loved reading it. You are a fantastic Poetess.

Last ride..... Ah! Takes mind away to dream world... This last ride seems to me A ride on the Rainbow after a heavey shower of love.... Subject is no doubt a poignant and passionate....But the poet is lucky to have a memory filled of such sweet ride... The passion behind such heavenly  voyage shall never get fadding.....it will ignite these feelings and passions till breathe last.... As once did Keats in his famous  la bella dam sans mercy  Its bliss when have love and lost, , , , , , then love can only be survived.....  U r very  right when saying that the outer world can never get understand the intensity of storms inside of heart.... Of strring emotion especially when love ceased to be.... Remind me lines of great Romantic figure, might be of Byron when he addressed his love with same feeling and passion.... And  Did not v see keats and Fanney's theme? They Had love but distined to be broken and parted.  The ultimate end of such love is a sweet melancholy which is purely a bliss for a poetic expressions.