The Leaves Poem by Rebecca Navarre

The Leaves

Rating: 5.0


I just wanna be, lost in a
maze of leaves...Walking...
Laying back...Feel the breeze...
The sun shinning...The way it weaves...
....So golden...through these....

Saturday, June 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,love,peace,spiritual,tranquility
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 06 March 2022

Becca is a great lover of nature. This poem stands in evidence and more. Loved this beauty every word in its place. Becca, you have an excellent poetic talent. Keep it up. Please write more frequently.5 *s Myfav

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2022

Feel the breeze...I can feel what the poetess intends to express here. A wonderful poem.5 stars.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2017

Wow a lovely superb nature poem in brevity. Thumbs up. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will review my latest poem titled, 'For all cheese chums'

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Rebecca Navarre 17 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! S.Zaynab, You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! You Are A Incredibly Wonderful Poet! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Your Poem! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

Feeling the breeze in between leaves amazes mind entirely. Getting sunshine mind feels golden appearance definitely. This is very interesting sharing done.10

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Rebecca Navarre 17 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Kind And Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! Hoped To Share Such Feelings. Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Such A Beautifully Deep Spiritual Feel! ! ! ! ! That Is So Touching To Readers Hearts! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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