your sun won't descend
from now till the end
come on great poet
teach us poetry
the legend of poemhunter aria
i play it on my violin
come on great poet
teach us music
a tale of indonesia
you are its hero
come on great poet
tell us the tale
give us a lesson of life
fate, forgiveness and happiness
raise your voice and let's sing together
O fallen leaf, O fallen feather!
july,2009.by Omar Ibrahim(a tribute to my friend'Ahmad Shiddiqi')
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A great tribute to Ahmad, a friend of mine here at poemhunter. A very meaningful poem to your dear friend and poet. A very good write. Your friend Lynn
: ( Even though i didnt know who you were talking about, I still liked this poem! ! It reads very well....has i kind of flow and melody to it.
Yes, Ahmad deserves lot more tribute from more poets specially for his voracious reading and wide knowledge....I join you with my salutes to Ahmad
A good tribute, I liked the opening rhymed couplet and the repeat of the device at the end but think a little more work is needed.
Beautiful tribute... Your words intoned a sort of mesmerizing chant. Wonderful work, Thanks :) ... Marina
raise your voice and let's sing together O fallen leaf, O fallen feather! ....................l est mankind may resurge from ruin entwined voices may glorify fallen.........wonderful write of tribute to the poet,1o++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Indeed a great poetry but one can expose not impose in creative pursuits… In my knowledge [I beg your excuse] poetry is matter of inside of poet where no one can enter … Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK