The Lime Tree Poem by Hazel Durham

The Lime Tree

Rating: 5.0


I always used to look outside my bedroom window,
At the old lime tree,
Solid and comforting, changing with the seasons,
Shedding your finery in the autumn chill,
Exposing your great soul that was the reason,
Spreading your blanket of golden and brown leaves,
You calmed my active mind,
When my spirit was broken by unknown thieves,
That plundered a young girl's psyche assunder,
Your presence of watching with care,
When the world seemed so unfair.

I lived in an imaginary place,
Where my dream's became real,
All part of my deal,
With God trying to grant me peace and love,
Unfolding from his holy kingdom above,
Wonderful evenings of listening to music,
Feeding my unfulfilled desire's,
I loved been in my bedroom, staying inside,
I could reach out and confide,
To famous pop stars,
That warmed my open, naive mind.

With my churning and jumbled up emotions,
Change was a fear out of my range,
Living was a picture I painted with freedom,
Creating a stunning landscape.
I would always pull across the darkened drapes,
Keeping me safe,
From an angry world that doesn't understand,
A young girl's wishes,
Of making my life rich with colours of many shades,
That I would never allow to fade.

I listened to the singers,
That quenched my emotional thirst,
Their words seemed to speak to me so clear,
With their good company so near,
Like the old lime tree a steady, constant influence,
In my turbulent teenage years,
That were congested with unexplainable fears,
Your presence uplifted me with your cheer,
Breaking down my very high fence,
Making my dreams become commom sense.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 22 September 2013

To me this is so nostalgic write...i feel the smoothing feeling in the air_Soul

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Ramesh Rai 30 August 2013

Hazel i love your pen n try to understand the heart which has such deep feelings. frnd we both r too late n we have to complete the job within a short span coz decades of our life is passed.. Your presence of watching with care, When the world seemed so unfair. a beautiful write.keep the track.

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Valsa George 27 August 2013

So the Lime tree was a symbol... a benevolent presence.. a reminder of the inalienable bond between man and Nature, a shady abode extending soothing comfort for the turbulent, overheated nerves of a teenager! As ever, a fantastic write, Hazel

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 23 August 2013

Beautiful poem, the image of the lime tree combined with life of youth is so lovely. An excellent write.

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Paul Brookes 23 August 2013

written with perception how many of us feel when overwhelmed by that strange time called adolescence woven together with mystery and imagination. BB: O)

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Bill Cantrell 18 May 2018

Ah, I sense much more than a tree, you are exceptionally good in meter, a complex poem with confessions of the past, wow, a great poem!

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Making the mundane meaningful and majestic is what great poetry is about. well done my friend, Hazel!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 March 2015

I always used to look outside my bedroom window, At the old lime tree, Beautiful....................10

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Kanav Justa 15 November 2013

//// a wonderful poem hazel, , , loved the imagery used in the poem

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Deepak Sawhney 08 October 2013

A beautiful write Hazel. Turbulent & torrid early years, nicely crafted into a smooth flowing poem, with each verse significant unto itself. Great rhyme & rhythm too. Enjoyed the read.

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