IF I were six feet tall,
I wouldn't be short
At all!
But here I am,
Down
Close to the ground,
And as
Big around
As I am
Tall!
Dedicated to Whistle Gal
Now I feel quite sad for you Scarlett, but I undersand the short bit. Cute write. Love Ernestine XXX
You're a pal of a gal and I'm lucky to know you! Keep your smile on 'cause it ain't over 'til it's over, friend! Love to you, Esther : ]
Now now, Oiseau Rouge, I suspect that you're selling yourself short! Love this one. It's tight and pithy and very well written. Allie la Chatte XXX
This is a fine poem. It's short, clever, funny and well-written. Larry Beck
A cute 'short' piece indeed. But hey - if the legs reach the ground, who cares? ! ! ! I like this. Don't know why it appeals. But it does.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
POETIC BRIEVITY IS AN UNDERESTIMATED ART WITHIN THE ART, KIND OF A PENUMBRA OF SORTS...YOU TAKE 29 SIMPLISTIC WORDS & SPIN THEM INTO A TRUE -LIFE PICTORIAL ENGLAZED WITH PRONOUNCED IMEGEWORX...AND VOILA...YOU'VE ACCOMPLISHED POETIC BRIEVITY IN A BEAUTIFULLY MOLDED CAPSULE...NICE JOB SCARLETT...FRANK/FJR