The Lost Love Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The Lost Love



My dreams once twinkled
Shined and glittered
In the vastness of my mind,
Now shattered,
Broken into bits,
Lie scattered
Down your feet,
Can you say you have
Forgotten those days?
The face beheld in them
Is not yours?
That face holds
No marks of tears?

In breeze,
The songs, you sang for me
To soothe my ailing sense,
Those threads of eternal love
Woven into my heart,
Now, upon your feet,
Lie deserted in the dust,
In rotten rust,
Can you say, you never
Touched their strings?
And they bear no pains?

22 03 08

Saturday, March 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love lost,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

this one is so very beautiful indeed my dear sir.. i see you v written this from the core of your heart.. poetry is ever so beautiful when they are written from heart! ! ! ! I loved this one....... these days i m sort of restricted reading emotional ones though.... with lots of love to you// hope you are in fine health shan

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Smiley Hooker 24 July 2009

Who can understand the pain of losing a love than people in love. If it wasn't meant to be, someone better might come along your way, so save some love in your heart.Touching piece...smile, my friend! :)

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Danny H 25 May 2009

This was very very good: ] i love how you placed the image of someone just coming up an crushing your dreams: then leaving them broken just lying there

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Muhammad Ali 27 April 2009

O it is superb and i can breath it.... hmmm nice poem friend!

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a really toching poem..a bond if lost or neglected causes immense..you words had that pain...please read my 'a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me' and 'a song.....'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020

My dreams.....broken into bits..../Lie scattered down your feet.....scintillating poetic expression! A magnificent poem.......Top score!

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 July 2020

Very touchy and straight from your heart. Compliments.

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Captain Cur 04 March 2020

A painfully written, yet elegant and enchanting poem on love lost. There is beauty created through pain.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2020

Powerful, poignant and touching poem. Words so beautifully woven to convey the deepest pains brought by lost love. A very heartfelt write so wonderfully crafted.

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Amitava Sur 20 August 2015

A poignant write about missing or losing the love you had once. Very nice.

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