My dreams once twinkled
Shined and glittered
In the vastness of my mind,
Now shattered,
Broken into bits,
Lie scattered
Down your feet,
Can you say you have
Forgotten those days?
The face beheld in them
Is not yours?
That face holds
No marks of tears?
In breeze,
The songs, you sang for me
To soothe my ailing sense,
Those threads of eternal love
Woven into my heart,
Now, upon your feet,
Lie deserted in the dust,
In rotten rust,
Can you say, you never
Touched their strings?
And they bear no pains?
22 03 08
Who can understand the pain of losing a love than people in love. If it wasn't meant to be, someone better might come along your way, so save some love in your heart.Touching piece...smile, my friend! :)
This was very very good: ] i love how you placed the image of someone just coming up an crushing your dreams: then leaving them broken just lying there
a really toching poem..a bond if lost or neglected causes immense..you words had that pain...please read my 'a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me' and 'a song.....'
My dreams.....broken into bits..../Lie scattered down your feet.....scintillating poetic expression! A magnificent poem.......Top score!
A painfully written, yet elegant and enchanting poem on love lost. There is beauty created through pain.
Powerful, poignant and touching poem. Words so beautifully woven to convey the deepest pains brought by lost love. A very heartfelt write so wonderfully crafted.
A poignant write about missing or losing the love you had once. Very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this one is so very beautiful indeed my dear sir.. i see you v written this from the core of your heart.. poetry is ever so beautiful when they are written from heart! ! ! ! I loved this one....... these days i m sort of restricted reading emotional ones though.... with lots of love to you// hope you are in fine health shan