don’t be sad
my dearest sun
the moon is here
to share your light..
night looks forlorn
lack of glaring shine
billows appear gloomy
warning of a lonely night..
when hope appears doubtful
and your feelings are hurt
no one listens, no one cares
just wait till the morning comes
i will bring all the hopes
reveal the unspoken words
and untie your worries...
This is a beautiful and very kind tribute, Naizz, to a person who was kind enough to help you when you first came to poem hunter. Under his tuteledge, I am sure your skills as a poet were greatly improved. It is alltogether fitting and proper to pay him the respect he deserves, as well as a very courteous gesture on your part.Carl.
sure we cannot allow mr sulaiman to abandon us. he has been a responsible brother and miss him too.nicely written. voted10 surya
don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light.. very slow and sad write, your style is very beautiful
don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light...nothignto worry so long as somebody is there to share with...life will be dead without anybody in life... i liked it most.....10 anywhere...butterflies around.....
A fne tribute to the masterful Brett....I know that he will cherish your words my dear friend.....thanks for the share of your beautiful soul 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely naiidz...a great tribute to a fellow poet