The Man 4 Poem by lady grace

The Man 4

Rating: 5.0


don’t be sad
my dearest sun
the moon is here
to share your light..

night looks forlorn
lack of glaring shine
billows appear gloomy
warning of a lonely night..

when hope appears doubtful
and your feelings are hurt
no one listens, no one cares

just wait till the morning comes
i will bring all the hopes
reveal the unspoken words
and untie your worries...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 September 2009

lovely naiidz...a great tribute to a fellow poet

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wonderful dedication to him

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Carl Harris 06 September 2009

This is a beautiful and very kind tribute, Naizz, to a person who was kind enough to help you when you first came to poem hunter. Under his tuteledge, I am sure your skills as a poet were greatly improved. It is alltogether fitting and proper to pay him the respect he deserves, as well as a very courteous gesture on your part.Carl.

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Surya . 06 September 2009

sure we cannot allow mr sulaiman to abandon us. he has been a responsible brother and miss him too.nicely written. voted10 surya

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Surya . 06 September 2009

sure.mr sulaiman cannot abandon us.nicely told voted10 surya

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

Thank you......................

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Rafique Farooqi 18 September 2009

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light.. very slow and sad write, your style is very beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light...nothignto worry so long as somebody is there to share with...life will be dead without anybody in life... i liked it most.....10 anywhere...butterflies around.....

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 September 2009

A beautiful tribute to the versatile poet..............

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~ Jon London ~ 07 September 2009

A fne tribute to the masterful Brett....I know that he will cherish your words my dear friend.....thanks for the share of your beautiful soul 10

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