The Man 4 Poem by lady grace

hmmm? very poetic nice touch

lovely lady lovely poem

I have also requested Sulaiman to continue in PH as he was taking farewell from his friends in PH. Hope he will continue with all our requestes.

you have expressed your emotions very well

Dear NAIZZ (LADY GRACE) , I don't know how and whom to address. Suleman's poem I'm yet to read and comment upon.While I was in Singapore, we couldn't meet due to his pre-occupation in business overseas. He is a nice man. Your poem depicts the feelings sensibly and emotionaly.Only two suggestion to maintain the flow properly. choice, of course, is yours. In L 3 & 4, this might look better: 'the moon is here to share your light' and L 7-'billows appear gloomy' Rated high Rajkumar.

Thank you......................

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light.. very slow and sad write, your style is very beautiful

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light...nothignto worry so long as somebody is there to share with...life will be dead without anybody in life... i liked it most.....10 anywhere...butterflies around.....

A beautiful tribute to the versatile poet..............

A fne tribute to the masterful Brett....I know that he will cherish your words my dear friend.....thanks for the share of your beautiful soul 10