The Mist Does Drape The Distant Hill Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

The Mist Does Drape The Distant Hill

Rating: 5.0


The mist does drape the distant hill
And grips the bleak and ghostly skies,
With silence for the morning still
Across the field and meadow lies.

For clinging to the darkness there
A cloak is cast upon the view,
Behind the trees so stark and bare
The sun is slowly breaking through.

The air is chill upon this day
November now begins to bite,
The swallows too long flown away
That once did bring me such delight.

The path ahead is so unclear
As features now are lost to me,
For all that I once held so dear
Lies hidden in the mist I see.

I walk across the lowly field
Where frost has settled on the grass,
And pray the spring again would yield
Its warmth to melt this frozen glass.

So once again the stream could flow
Across the rich and emerald land,
Now vieled in white and thus could show
The hill within the distance stand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 December 2008

You have combined the foggy November thoughts in your mind allegorically very well with the mist that drapes the distant morning hill...a poem as fresh pure and original as the morning dew...10

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Thad Wilk 29 November 2008

Poetry soooo picture perfect, spectacular imagery, another - masterful work of art! ! ! My best regards Andrew! ! *10*! Friend Thad

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Wordsworth would have doffed his cap to you; for whilst your rhythm, flow and vividly accurate descriptions equal if not surpass his, yours also carries an engaging, question-begging message. Top marks. t x

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Lynda Robson 26 November 2008

A beautiful descriptive write Andrew, mist drapes the distant hills here today, your poem always brings nature to life, thank you, 10 Lynda xx

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