The Moon Invites You To Drink Whisky Poem by ahmed khaled

The Moon Invites You To Drink Whisky

Rating: 5.0


Twice a year..
I drink whisky..
With the moon..
In the first..
I get drunk..
He gets not..
But in the second..
Only he..
Takes the line..
And if you say why..
No one but whisky..
Can be the answer..
And this is the answer..
In the second..
The whisky was..
Global Warming..
But in the first..
The whisky was..
Somali Hunger..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 14 January 2012

Love it, a fantastic poem my friend.

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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 January 2012

great poem............................

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Vipins Puthooran 17 January 2012

It's a great poem in your elegant style...top marks! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 15 January 2012

I drink Juices, to embrace the fresh nature, so the freshness will keep me sober in tasteful joy for i will not drunk to forget from protecting nature, mean if i want more freshness shield this world from global warming, so i still can see the moon smile with me...But when the Somali hanger recalled i will even drink my tears, to thankful what we have and pray for moon keep smiling and releasing joy to them via the light_Unwritten Soul

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George Krokos 14 January 2012

Firstly, I don't drink. Secondly, yes I understand what your saying. We all need to do more and avoid those situations.

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Eric Cockrell 14 January 2012

powerful... great use of images. enjoyed it much!

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