ahmed khaled


Be A Dream - Poem by ahmed khaled

tell the wave...
not to burn
tell the fire...
not to wet
and tell the flower...
/// be a dream ///


Comments about Be A Dream by ahmed khaled

  • Soul Watcher (11/13/2014 8:02:00 AM)

    كلمات بالرغم من قصرها ولكنها تحميل معاني جميلة خلفها
    شكرا على المشاركة
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  • Okoye Charles Chukwudi (2/15/2012 5:39:00 PM)

    nice poem.......short and deep....very deep....keep it up

    check out my poem 2b or not 2b.....thanks for sharing
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  • (1/8/2012 7:22:00 PM)

    Your poem is very nicely written! Great job! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/4/2012 11:05:00 PM)

    beautiful and short 'n elegant
    many meaning
    one that i can see is to be yourself!
    and all of the things to do is to Dream! ! !
    ~Bella
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  • (1/4/2012 11:04:00 PM)

    Thanks for showing me this, It was wonderful. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/4/2012 7:10:00 PM)

    I think this is a really good poem. I'll admit, I'm not a huge fan of the word wet here, but as it is your intellectual property, I will not tell you to change it. I definitely like it, though! (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Stevens (1/4/2012 6:54:00 PM)

    i like it, its deep in a way. tells one to be true to himself. at least that is what i see in it. (Report)Reply

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  • Grant Lovell (1/4/2012 12:18:00 AM)

    Indeed, some talent there. Very good. (Report)Reply

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  • Smoky Hoss (1/3/2012 10:53:00 PM)

    Yes. I like this, each should be true to their own nature; and beauty (the flower) is ofcourse the most magnificent and mystical. Very good. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/3/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    This poem is just too short! Isn’t it? ? ? ? but it carries too many meanings nice! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/2/2012 12:12:00 PM)

    Very strong meanings, and its a very unique poem indeed.- DarkX474 (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (1/2/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    Excellent poetic fantasy/ 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Hans Vr (12/30/2011 12:21:00 AM)

    Very poetic call for authenticity.
    A very nice poem, Ahmed
    Original and a pleasure to read
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  • (12/29/2011 11:44:00 PM)

    it is so nice. it conveys lots of thoughts here. nice work. u really are a great poet. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2011 2:21:00 PM)

    That is a really good. I will re-read it tomorrow, sure. (Report)Reply

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  • Ebi Robert (12/29/2011 7:45:00 AM)

    short but reavealing (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2011 4:31:00 AM)

    wow this will make me read your other stuff... nice writing (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (12/28/2011 7:48:00 PM)

    I really like this. Telling the people not to chase after the bad and selling their souls to the devil, perhaps? The flower presenting innocence, peace and beauty. Sometimes just a dream... A great poem, Ahmed. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/28/2011 7:31:00 PM)

    wow, so short but full of loveliness :) (Report)Reply

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  • Claudia Krizay (12/28/2011 5:40:00 PM)

    Very delicately beautiful, in just a few words. I have trouble written short poems that mean anything- I envy you! Excellent work! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 18, 2012


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