tell the wave...
not to burn
tell the fire...
not to wet
and tell the flower...
/// be a dream ///
i like it, its deep in a way. tells one to be true to himself. at least that is what i see in it.
Indeed, some talent there. Very good.
Yes. I like this, each should be true to their own nature; and beauty (the flower) is ofcourse the most magnificent and mystical. Very good.
This poem is just too short! Isn’t it? ? ? ? but it carries too many meanings nice!
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nice poem.......short and deep....very deep....keep it up check out my poem 2b or not 2b.....thanks for sharing
Your poem is very nicely written! Great job! !
beautiful and short 'n elegant many meaning one that i can see is to be yourself! and all of the things to do is to Dream! ! ! ~Bella
Thanks for showing me this, It was wonderful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I think this is a really good poem. I'll admit, I'm not a huge fan of the word wet here, but as it is your intellectual property, I will not tell you to change it. I definitely like it, though!