Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 23,053 Points (18 October 1964)

The Most Beautiful Poem (Sonnet) - Poem by Aufie Zophy

How I wish I would have the special words
To write the very most fantastic verse
I would pen it down with feathers of birds
write the nicest poem in the universe

I would dip the colourful plume in ink
That is magic and wonderfully blue
Using gothic letters of which I think
Anyone could see they were made for you

And this world would be full with jealous eyes
They would all be envying you so much
All people ‘d turn their heads towards the skies
Wish a poem was written for them as such

But this one was for you and you alone
A superb poem, with a wonderful tone

Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful, love, poems, poetry, writing

Form: Sonnet

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Please take a look at my 2 other attempts tow write sonnets too.
They are:
1. The golden key
2. The song of heaven

Comments about The Most Beautiful Poem (Sonnet) by Aufie Zophy

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (2/2/2017 1:02:00 PM)

    Beautiful Poem, With a Wonderful Tone
    Oops! The last verses do not rhyme. But this one was for you and you alone
    The most beautiful poem, with a wonderful tone. (suggestion) . Keep on writing.
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    Hans Vr (2/3/2017 6:04:00 AM)

    Many thanks, Herbert. You are right about the last verses. Good suggestion to use tone.

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  • (1/16/2016 9:09:00 AM)

    I love the sonnet form and this one is true in style, form and substance.We all would like to write the line
    immortal..Very well done
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  • Unwritten Soul (1/3/2016 3:50:00 AM)

    Beautiful, i see that you tried many form of poetry and thats a very nice idea to make you be one of the real this one very much (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (12/11/2015 10:57:00 PM)

    Beautifully written, metered well with the rhymes. (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2015 12:09:00 AM)

    Superb desire expressed in an excellent poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (12/10/2015 11:33:00 PM)

    A non-comparable expression of heartfelt love, real romantic way. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Poem By (12/10/2015 11:18:00 PM)

    indeed a blessed gift to give
    poems, perfect poems...

    NIcE! ! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, April 21, 2017

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