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The New Girl

Rating: 5.0
Say my name - just say it....
roll the sounds around your tongue.
Fashion your lips - to expel the breath-to create the word...
Just once look my way, not in that' just having a look around' way but seek me out...hold my gaze....just for a second..but long enough for me to perceive it..
Let that glorious light of recognition illuminate your dark and impenetrable eyes, seeing the passion kindling in mine and knowing you have a power over me....
Feel the nape of your neck begin to shiver with anticipation of warm lips brushing that delicious spot you find irresistible,
And as you walk past, brush my shoulder languidly....
Leave a lingering memory of your presence -Gucci 'Guilty Absolute'...are you ready to take a leap of faith?
To smile and say 'hello you're new aren't you'
Show me the coffee machine! - point out the fire exit! - ask me to dinner...anything...but see me...just see me
All I ever see is you......
The New Girl
Friday, October 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: crush,new,secret,work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
who doesn't remember that secret crush you had on someone at work?
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COMMENTS
Shaun Cronick 02 October 2020
Another superbly original and so finely woven poem Lodigiana about the crush or infatuation others display for the opposite s e x at work. For me they turn out to be bunny boilers. All petite and so, so sweet and innocent as if butter wouldn't melt in their mouth. hen asking If I own a rabbit and a large saucepan and is my cooker gas or electric. A real Fatal Attraction. Five stars and worthy for this most enjoyable read. Take care Lodigiana. Shaun.x.
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Lodigiana Poetess 03 October 2020
Thanks so much Shaun..your comments did make me laugh...big saucepan and Rabbit hahaha! Really pleased you enjoyed this one - keep laughing my friend! Lodigiana x
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Lodigiana Poetess 11 September 2019
Thank you so much Frank, who can forget those workplace crushes? Lodigiana x
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Sandra Feldman 09 April 2019
Visually and poetically perfect. Quite passionate and excellently written. Lovely and exciting, flow.
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lodigiana 09 April 2019
Thanks so much Sandra appreciate your generous comments.. I guess most of us have had a secret workplace crush to look back on and remember with a slightly nostalgic smile...xx
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Bri Edwards 18 March 2019
this is now borrowed and bound for my April showcase. Thanks. bri ;) i owe you a bottle of Aramis.
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Lodigiana 18 March 2019
Thanks so much Bri...ahhh Aramis..such memories xx
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 January 2019
let your style come let your fashion come with passion let your plan be true on the path of welfare let your love be disclosed as the eternal being let your tears stay closed into your deep sea of eyes..../// you are really really so smart one, love it
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Lodigiana 28 January 2019
Thank you so much for your kind words! I will remember them xx
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Bipasha D 16 February 2018
This is super sensual, very enjoyable read :)
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Lodigiana Poetess 17 February 2018
So pleased you enjoyed it, thank you so much for commenting Lodigiana
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bri edwards 12 February 2018
the last five lines are 'precious'! ! ! to MyPoemList. could YOU write such a poem 'cause YOU experienced this? ? bri :)
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Lodigiana 13 February 2018
Maybe not to the degree many of my friends did.. but maybe a slight 'crushette' or two?
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bri edwards 12 February 2018
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Lodigiana 13 February 2018
Some smells are unforgettable...in my younger days it was Aramis that was 'the' fragrance! ! !
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bri edwards 12 February 2018
and i had a not-so-secret crush on a coworker who had a boyfriend and their baby, and i was married (none-too-happily) . the coworker told me to work on my marriage! good advice i guess. that wife was my 3rd divorce; she divorced me, but was almost immediately unhappy about her decision. we talk infrequently on phone now,15 years later. bri :) (to be continued) ...
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Lodigiana 13 February 2018
ah those crushes! ! ! they can make or break us can't they? Thanks as always for reading and commenting- much appreciated Bri
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bri edwards 12 February 2018
a new 'photo' on PH for you! and the photo on this page is almost TOO provocative. thanks for Poet's Note. i had a secret crush on a girl in the classroom next to mine in 2nd grade (age about 7): i didn't tell her until ten years later. (to be continued) ....
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