The day light
told the next-in night:
it’s now your shift
you watch out
for some dirty plots
i heard this day in midst
right now i must leave
so, a constant vigil you keep!
The night said: why not!
you may leave!
and yawning deep it thought
‘what that happens
in day light bright,
won't happen here in night!
For people awake an' do all dirt
my time they only sleep and rest;
let me spread my blanket black
get covered an' go sleep, fast! ’
Divine duality of the day and night. well penned write penetrating.10
this is so beautiful..let them in their dirty tricks..GOD knows best...true hearts always come out even if it rains...i would like to be kept too to stay from harm..but since you can't...so, i will just do it by myself to keep guarding myself til the middle of the night...grace
Terrific piece Kesav.....Day vs Night....crimnals look for the right time to strike, be it day or night...but you have a point, more eveil seems to happen during the day...10+++
An insightful write with a captivating title. The difference between day and night has been cleverly crafted. Wonderful thoughts to ponder about.
A very clever write. Anyone would jump to ideas with the title itself. So this is a stunner and describes well how your mind works to mislead the reader and plant something else to make the other look stupid after all. nicely written, thanks - arya
hey these is a sweet lullaby indeed.. lovely write again... yeah i wana cover my self in a blanket and sleep forever too.... some times i wish i can sleep forever.... with lots of love shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very significant..and well described theme..as this is in the nature of my job....10