Time is like a childish rhyme,
Inside the sanctuary of my head,
As I lie in our king size bed,
Like in a boat on a tranquil lake,
Watching the sunset flooding the sky with joy,
As I see our lives from this loving place,
I want to always dwell in your comforting face,
As birds fly with glee from the trees,
On the distant lakeshore,
Your desire leaves me wanting more,
As I lie in our king-size bed,
Our love affair was an unlikely dare,
I was out of step with life,
Puzzled by my limitations and expectations,
As I stayed on my own,
Then your deep, soothing voice was on the phone,
Your eyes desired my inner soul,
We danced into living my dreamlike trance,
After we watched the sunset fall from the sky,
In moments of pure bliss,
Truth replaced the lie,
I was not a weird loner,
Just a woman with fear holding her captive,
In a sometimes cold, opinionated world,
You bring your warmth to melt the ice,
I remember in the hotel you looked with passion at me twice,
We danced into a cocoon,
In rhythm with love like a catchy tune,
Playing within the sanctuary of my head,
As we lie in the oasis of our king size bed.
Time is like a childish rhyme seems too beautiful and wonderful thoughts shine through presentation. Playing with the sanctuary over head is oasis definitely speaks something. Once more read your poem and felt to leave another comment on re-reading.
Life is renewed and new meanings invested with the touch of love at a time when you feared that the sand under your feet was beginning to slip and you were losing your balance! You are now excited as traveller who has found an oasis in a blistering desert! Let your union be one of pure bliss! Beautiful write, Hazel!
Exquisite composing. Good word choice. Many thanks dear madam!
I was out of step with life......beautifully presented. So pleased your heart is now filled. x
Swimming in the sea of sensuality that is fed from a river of romance. Well worded my friend!
An amazing write with sweet melody and soul soothing. Love your ink.
An amazing write with sweet melody and soul soothing. Love your ink.
A Fantastic write Hazel. Beautiful flow of words...... Playing within the sanctuary of my head, As we lie in the oasis of our king size bed. Quite romantic and beautiful imagery of oasis portrayed. Loved it. Beautiful presentation.
An amazing beauty. Truth replaced the lie, I was not a weird loner, Just a woman with fear holding her captive, In a sometimes cold, opinionated world, ..................10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely romantic train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned. A beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.