Coming Home

Rating: 4.7

Punchestown races a glorious extravaganza,
You had a flutter on Fuchsia Belle,
Tall white haired man, softest baby blue eyes,
Everything new and wondrous to you,
Without any fuss you showered your warmth,
Outside the rain lashed down relentlessly,
All together we were like long lost pals,
As you wove your pure spell,
Watching as horses fell, virgin territory
For the farmer with plenty of charm,
Never doing anybody any harm,
A life dedicated to your beloved farm.
Years have passed many changes taking place,
Lover of nature, plenty of patience as you work at your own pace,
Gentleness oozes from your eyes like water over a smooth stone,
You hold my hand, i feel i am coming home.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About a day at the races with my boyfriend and daughter.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

Gentleness oozes from your eyes like water over a smooth stone, You hold my hand, i feel i am coming home.... brilliant expression. It was a nice day at the races you were with your boyfriend and daughter. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 June 2017

its nice to have boy friends and with them daughters and you don't have to be under any obligation either to either love pursues lovely poetree are you

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Tom Allport 26 May 2017

a poem of pure warmth with a feeling of being at home? ..............wonderfully written Hazel.

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Chinedu Dike 22 February 2017

A touch of class. Lovely poem passionately penned from the heart.

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Rameeza Nasim 01 February 2017

love it, beautifully written :)

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Prabir Gayen 15 December 2018

Very well crafted.. beautiful...

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 October 2018

You hold my hand I feel I am comming home. Lovely lines.Thanks for sharing.

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Beautiful poem. One must appreciate your ideas.

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Tom Squires 24 December 2017

yes brilliant, gentleness oozes like water, beautiful and unself conscious. Lovely

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Susan Williams 14 December 2017

Thank you for sharing this piece of your life in your home country- - the feeling of homecoming when the man is just the right fit with both woman and child and life becomes a joy! Well done! !

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