The Only Wish Poem by Hemakumar Nanayakkara

The Only Wish

Rating: 5.0


I never wished to be
a lonely sparrow
that lives in a luxurious
golden cage

I never wished to be
a strong eagle
that flies across the
clear blue sky

I never wished to be
a brawny lion
that reigns the kingdom
of wild animals

I never wished to be
the sunshine
that has lost its
lustrous glow

I never wished to be
a high mountain
that has no beautiful
pelting cascades

I never wished to be
the deep blue sea
that has no precious
pearls at its bottom

I never wished to be
the morning dew
that spills away from
a dangling rose

I never wished to be
the silver tears
that fall from your
sparkling eyes

I only wished to be
a golden memory
that always remains
in your mind...


Copyright(c) Hemakumar Nanayakkara

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 28 April 2008

I am so glad I read this poem, it is just lovely and well constructed, thank you, Lynda x

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Bonnie Collins 20 April 2008

OH this is so very gently penned with LOVE.... It really struck my heart... Excellent in my oppion........ Bonnie

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Sandra Fowler 20 April 2008

An eloquent offering. Our memories no one can take from us. Lovely work indeed. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Applause, applause! ! ! ! Very well written indeed, a soft lingering poem that leaves one relaxed and serene. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ann Beard 19 April 2008

Lovely Hamakumar. hope you get your wish. Regards Ann

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

wow...such a simple notion which holds so much beauty and honesty...you are truely worth reading again and again...

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Vilma Xelin 06 August 2008

wow! it really really touch me! I enjoy all other poems from you but this is just amazing! thanks for sharing!

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Jennifer Pryce 01 June 2008

this poem says such a lot, reading not only the lines, but between them....i love it. thanks for sharing. Jen x :)

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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2008

Dear Hemakumar, this is beautiful! Such wonderful images that build to a perfect denouement. Splendid poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 30 April 2008

very beautiful poem. I was wondering where you were going w/ it until those last few lines, 'the golden' themed memory is really nice imagery 10/10

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