The Orphan Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Orphan

Rating: 4.5


Existing,
Has not been,
Fun!
I feel like
A Shadow,
Never,
Fully done!
I travel,
Thru dreams
That never
Come true,
Above all
True love,
That special
Caress,
I never
Knew...

Tuesday, November 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 05 November 2020

A well scribed poem. Truly touching and poetic....5 stars*****

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2020

No love in life is nothing but the orphanage. A new term coined with love. Creative thinking.5***

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Kostas Lagos 03 November 2020

Feeling this way sometimes. Love your poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 November 2020

A heart-wrenching poem about sad love. Sandra, thank you for having the courage to express what so many of us have wanted to.

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