The Other Side Of The Moon Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Other Side Of The Moon

Rating: 5.0


What secrets does the Moon hide
On its non-luminous side?
The Dark One, the one we can't see,
Does it participate in controlling the Tide
Of the life giving Oceanside?
Does it whisper to the sky?
'No one can see me, no human eye'
Does it dream of having Light?
The light Love brings to darkest night,
Or like a vampire, is it content
With the darkness of a life secretly spent.

Sunday, October 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leah Ayliffe 31 October 2015

Beautiful Sandra! Loved this piece very much.

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 October 2015

This poem has a very wistful air to it Sandra...very philosophical and quiet. I like it! Eventually, the moon shows us ALL its sides...right? :) I'm sure Kelly Kurt could give us the in-depth answer to that...

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Sanjukta Nag 26 October 2015

The questions that no one has answers, still we like to imagine about those. Amazingly written with a brilliant way of imagination. This is a poem beyond rating.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 October 2015

The light love brings to darkest night Or like a vampire, is it content With the darkness of a life secretly spent. The moon keeps on revolving around it's axis and in the course of time it's dark side too becomes luminous. Same may be the fate of any closely guarded secret. Nothing can be a secret till eternity and gets exposed, sooner or late. In short, positive approach and attitude do help in day to day life too. Thanks.10++

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Brian Mayo 25 October 2015

Maybe there is no other side... I asked the Moon and it replied I catch your whispers in the night and keep your secrets out of sight

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 October 2015

Nice comment Brian! You give good commentary!

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