The Poem Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Poem

Rating: 5.0


The first light appeared in the sky
It sent shimmering rays
Over the rice field
A golden path was created
It tickled the dendrites
Of my mind.

A new day is born
I immediately grab my pen
It bleeds
Myriad of thoughts and emotions
And words
Dance before my very eyes.

At dawn
A poem is born
It is a recollection of sorrows
Solitude and togetherness
A slice of history
And a childhood memory.

It is my language
That comes from the innermost
Chamber of the mind
Through the core of the heart.

It is ardently hoped
That like a river
It flows
And sears through
Your deepest hearts.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2017

That like a river..It flows..And sears through..To your deepest hearts..I feel the beauty of expression of a poetic soul here! Such a wonderful piece..10/10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2017

Your nice comments are highly appreciated, Dr.Dillip. Thank you for the visit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2017

Your generous comments fuel the mind to soar. Thank you, Dr. Dillip for your visit.

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 November 2017

wow! The torrent flow of words Dances in my mind and itches in the core of heart to inspire a poet to free words from inner soul- continue your poems with my 10###

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2017

Thank you so much for your generous comments. It is really an honor.

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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2022

A piece of great elegance

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Anjandev Roy 08 January 2022

Such a precious work......thank u....happy new year...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 June 2021

5 Stars Full and to my Favourites. I will come back to give my comments. Thank yiou for understanding

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Varsha M 11 February 2021

It is my language That comes from the innermost Chamber of the mind Through the core of the heart....these words are beautiful. Heart touching.

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Varsha M 11 February 2021

Such a lovely expression of the birth of poem. So well penned and presented. Lovely. Encaptivating.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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