The Prayer Poem by lady grace

The Prayer

Rating: 4.6


Almighty God,
You created all the things in this globe
green fields oceans and clean air
small... big creatures in any breeds...

all You had made have a purpose
to make the world beautiful...

the human,
You mold him and let rise from the dust
furnish with mind body and soul
grant with wisdom to tame the wildlife.

our life started and ends here
strengthen our faith so we can guard
evil spirit will not win
this message is our prayer..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 27 July 2009

hey Lady Grace, , , ..... i know how it feels to be in love with god... yet the case is things happened in my life.. my faith is strong enough to believe in god.. but if he is out there.. i think we should all praise him for blessing you with such gracious heart.... spread the god's love.. kinda love that some can die for others sins.. that s the kind of love jesus taught us.. with lots of love to u... shan

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Surya . 27 July 2009

vow! you said it. a prayer for the world. voted10 surya

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Fay Slimm 27 July 2009

Amen to that my friend - a lovely prayer to join you in - thank you 10 + + + Fay

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 28 July 2009

You know I cannot copy any lines in this poem to put in this comment box because I'll just be repeating all words here. Because every line means such and I saw your name in the top 500 poets! Good job!

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Noel Horlanda 28 July 2009

It's a good prayer. If I were you, try to let Pope Benedict XVI read it and who knows he might approved and bless it and become an official prayer in the church and in every Catholic home. Joking only... thanks for sharing.

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Sranisha Francis 22 September 2015

Almighty God, You created all the things in this globe green fields oceans and clean air small... big creatures in any breeds... Yes expressed it so beautifully the work of Almighty.

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evil spirit will not win’…and indeed so… Humanness will remain at zenith and throw beckon light to guide us always… Very nice diction Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2009

Almighty God, You created all the things in this globe green fields oceans and clean air....everything we owe to HIm... very beautiful prayer...i likeditso much....10 read mine o, lord....prayer.....humble submission.....preayer for friend

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

Ameen! very heartfelt wording dear grace! 10+

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Siddharth Singh 10 August 2009

A very honest prayer from the bottom of the heart.

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