The Prince Of Night Poem by koyel mitra

The Prince Of Night

Rating: 4.8


The Prince of Night is in love with the Morning Princess,
The Princess is stupefying with golden jewellery to her dress;
She is fair and cheerful,
The Prince is dark and mournful.

The Prince though tall and handsome,
is always doleful and glum;
The Princess is full of vivacity,
She is full of vitality.

Every night the Prince waits for her in despair,
She refuses to come in a proud air;
She appears every morning with a dazzling brilliance,
The Prince fears her extraordinary radiance.

So every morning he flees,
Behind a dark house with a stolen look he sees;
One day the Princess catches him and says'Why are you feeling low?
It's your seeds of love that now I am going to sow! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raja Basu 23 September 2008

I felt that I was going through a nice fairy tale. Beautiful combination of imagination and language power.

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, aryaindia 23 September 2008

The central theme is very good but the poem could be more poetic really. Thanks, arya

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Wonderful write. I like it. Peace out, Lexi Baby.

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Nia Riz 19 September 2008

good poem. good ending too. but you could have used a bit of rhyming words, only if that was your type of writing. anyway, keep on writing.

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Pallichadath Balasubramanian 18 September 2008

I liked this poem. Very good imagination. Best wishes to the poet.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 August 2016

It's your seeds of love that now I am going to sow, beautiful depiction by imagery! , thanks for sharing

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Subham Dutta 01 July 2009

Very nice and meaningfull poem.

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Leonard Daranjo 25 October 2008

Highly imaginative. I enjoyed the read. Leonard

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 October 2008

IT'S UR SEEDS OF OVE THAT I AM NOW GOING TO SOW... WOW...! ! ! MARVELLOUS LINES...

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

imagination is superb and i liked the concluding line- One day the Princess catches him and says'Why are you feeling low? It's your seeds of love that now I am going to sow! ' its so inspiring and sounds like the fact of life and lives.

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