I prayed the sun would shine today
But still the rain keeps falling
It seems the clouds are here to stay -
O feel the darkness calling
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The last verse throws the optimistic point of view on this nicely written piece, nothing can we do except enjoy what ever we are given from day to day.......
The rain is falling here in tropics as I read your poem. The tinkling sounds of -ing rhymers match with the falling raindrops. I've come across your poetry just a week ago, you write beatiful poetry, Val Cheers!
Beautiful wordd as usual. Wr could use some of that rain in south Texas. Wr are in the worst possible droughr.
Your observance of the weather in the beautiful, lovely, rhyming verse is captivating! !
Nature is caught in all its splendid variety and beauty in your poems Valerie! While you look for the sunshine, we long for the rains! !
A wonderful poem, if it's not the rain it's the snow. We should be due some sun soon.
Val, I find music in this poem and I can hear musical notes.......falling, calling, descending, soulful yearning. I have not yet made up my mind how to describe you as a poetess, perhaps, in future.