Monday, March 18, 2013

The Rain Keeps Falling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I prayed the sun would shine today
But still the rain keeps falling
It seems the clouds are here to stay -
O feel the darkness calling
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Valerie Dohren
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Manohar Bhatia 28 October 2013

Val, I find music in this poem and I can hear musical notes.......falling, calling, descending, soulful yearning. I have not yet made up my mind how to describe you as a poetess, perhaps, in future.

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G.R. Gaus 24 April 2013

The last verse throws the optimistic point of view on this nicely written piece, nothing can we do except enjoy what ever we are given from day to day.......

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Yasmin Khan 03 April 2013

The rain is falling here in tropics as I read your poem. The tinkling sounds of -ing rhymers match with the falling raindrops. I've come across your poetry just a week ago, you write beatiful poetry, Val Cheers!

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Kelvin Owusu 01 April 2013

aq lovely write and a enjoyable read this is a wonderful piece

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Juan Olivarez 27 March 2013

Beautiful wordd as usual. Wr could use some of that rain in south Texas. Wr are in the worst possible droughr.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 March 2013

What can I say... Another beautiful piece of writing.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 March 2013

a beautiful poem on rain and its benefits! ! !

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Smoky Hoss 26 March 2013

Beautiful words, and obviously from a beautiful soul.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 26 March 2013

Your observance of the weather in the beautiful, lovely, rhyming verse is captivating! !

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Adeline Foster 25 March 2013

I like it, well written. Read mine - Rain - Adeline

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Mary Forrester 25 March 2013

Ah I loved this poem, how beautiful Valerie.

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Valsa George 23 March 2013

Nature is caught in all its splendid variety and beauty in your poems Valerie! While you look for the sunshine, we long for the rains! !

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Kelvin Owusu 19 March 2013

always a joy to read your work, great as always

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Dave Walker 18 March 2013

A wonderful poem, if it's not the rain it's the snow. We should be due some sun soon.

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