man is not bad
atleast according to him
man is not evil
atleast according to him
man has this apparatus
the reasoning apparatus
with which he could
make good his bad
and without this man would go mad if he is still bad
an apparatus which pampers man to do bad
this reasoning one...sad
Dear Samanyan, This is a good little poem. Man can be a demon or a deity. Good or evil both resides in him. It all depends on how the reasoning is used by him before going for a good deed or a bad one. Thanks for sharing -Rajkumar
What we do, whether it good or bad ia out of choice, and out of the wrong choices the human race is still suffering today.....great piece
How true! we reason our bad into good! the irony of it all makes one laugh! nice thought!
Man can twist his reasoning, imagination apparatus to suit his needs and convert good into bad and bad into good. Very good thought. But this poem needs to be a little readjusted to make this diction more clear.
The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make it far more readable and understandable. Carl.
The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make in far more readable and understandable. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great write..............well penned