The Spider's House Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Spider's House

Rating: 5.0


Ruthless dwelling place
Built without kindness and joy
Artful trap for death.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 17 January 2021

Interesting perspective

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Rini Shibu 17 January 2021

Trap of death..very..there is depth in this lines

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2021

Your visit to the spider's house as poet is quite meaningful. Aptly expressed.5 stars and to MyPoemList

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M Asim Nehal 18 January 2021

An interesting net to catch it's prey. Deep and thoughtful poem.

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Lyn Paul 18 January 2021

Two dwellings came to mind. A prison and the White house at this present time.

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Shaun Cronick 19 January 2021

Gives me the creeps!

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David Wood 19 January 2021

Perfect Haiku gets a 5*

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

3) 1) I digress, you have made a great fascinating poem, short but very strong and powerful.5 Stars and to my favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

2) 2) but so true: it is a trap for the intruders, a safety net with death as the answer, whatever I call it: it IS a bait, necessity of life of the spider, but death of the guest, how wonderful: the spider kills many insects that we can really miss.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

1) 1) His life, the death of the guest! Really awful. If we look closely, the spider's face is like death itself. Trully creepy! The spider web in bright sunlight is really artistic, especially if there are small drops of water,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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