Ruthless dwelling place
Built without kindness and joy
Artful trap for death.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Your visit to the spider's house as poet is quite meaningful. Aptly expressed.5 stars and to MyPoemList
An interesting net to catch it's prey. Deep and thoughtful poem.
Two dwellings came to mind. A prison and the White house at this present time.
3) 1) I digress, you have made a great fascinating poem, short but very strong and powerful.5 Stars and to my favourites.
2) 2) but so true: it is a trap for the intruders, a safety net with death as the answer, whatever I call it: it IS a bait, necessity of life of the spider, but death of the guest, how wonderful: the spider kills many insects that we can really miss.
1) 1) His life, the death of the guest! Really awful. If we look closely, the spider's face is like death itself. Trully creepy! The spider web in bright sunlight is really artistic, especially if there are small drops of water,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting perspective