The Stars And The Moon Are Jealous Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Stars And The Moon Are Jealous

Rating: 5.0


They danced passionately
Under the canopy
Of the night sky
Formed a single line
Bodies swayed swiftly
And feet moved rhythmically
To the tune of
Achy Breaky Heart.

They laughed sweetly
And endlessly
The echoes of their laughter
Joined the murmur
Of the flowing stream
And when they smiled to each other
The moon and the stars
Are jealous of the sparkles
In their eyes.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 14 June 2023

A rhymical, so lovely amorous poetic dance, we feel the loving movement as if transported and in a trance. Such an unforgettable and lovely poem. Thank you for the gifted romance!

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Congratulations, Rose Marie. This poem has entered the list of Best Poems of Members today.

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Anjandev Roy 14 June 2023

Of the flowing stream...... lovely write..... thank u, dear poetess....

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 June 2023

The lines are flowing so smoothly like a stream. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

And Ever Ever so many well deserved 'Congratulations'! .. And Also Beyond #'S of course! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

And such a wonderous, beautiful and joyful feel! .. Truly incredible! .. Bringing such smiles to the readers heart! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

Ahh, i was going to catch this next time around... But Awesome! .. So Beautifully Beautifully worded! ..

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Susan Williams 14 July 2023

it is so good to sit here dreaming of this event.... top romantic hearts for this yummy poem

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Susan Williams 14 July 2023

oh! this is so lovely! I dream of being that woman dancing in the arms of her love! Thank you for sharing this with us

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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