s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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s.zaynab kamoonpuri
Port Hart corte (place of birth)
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The Statue Of Liberty

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(for my personal religious twist read d last stanza)

Stands tall and hovering this great landmark lady
The world's most famous gift and token
Welcoming all into Uncle Sam's ethnic potpourri
In her vast melting pot sweet unity awoken.

Pointing as it seems to the star spangled sky
from the land of the stripes and star-spangled banner
Her torch to meet the tourist traveller's eye
while she tires not of standin' in that manner.
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Sunday, October 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: Art
Did u know d statue of liberty was a gift present to America frm France, ? Yes it was.
Ken E Hall 04 December 2013
Great lesson on thee Statue as we have all seen its majestic stand many times enjoyable lesson to learn thanks and regards
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Mehri Mehraban 15 November 2013
A I respect the delicacy of your opinion about liberty and the style you describe this statue. For me, the Last stanza is the best part. Good luck Good luck.
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Kanav Justa 15 November 2013
, , , you described it so well, , , great work
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Joe Breunig 14 November 2013
An interesting, enjoyable and fun piece; yes, like many Americans, I knew it was a gift crafted by Bartoli; in fact, the statute's face is that of Bartoli's mother - how's that for trivia? IMHO, this piece would magnificantly shine from some editing - for me, punctuation is the polish on the gem of one's writing. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
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Valsa George 06 November 2013
A beautiful description of the mammoth statue, standing proud and erect in the quiet waters of Hudson river! It is indeed an awe inspiring sight. Yes this symbol of liberty is dressed from head to foot and never liberated from the' bondage of an apparel' as many of the cine models are! Enjoyed the twist in the last stanza! ! Superb! !
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Roseann Shawiak 04 November 2013
Have always loved the Statue of Liberty. My grandparents all came over from Mierto, Sicily and landed on Ellis Island. Their names are in the book there. Your poem touched my memory's heart and the gentle humor made me smile. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Marvin Brato 25 October 2013
Truthful sentiments....with a twist of humor!
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Shamin Shah 22 October 2013
You have a different style of writing and its really wonderful. I love the humour part, really helps make your poem stand out. Personal thoughts in the poem makes you a very awesome poet. Will love to read your poems. A beautifully crafted poem and the words used to describe the glory and what you felt are just perfect. ++10
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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2013
a beautiful tribute to the Statue of Liberty. A proud lady for sure.
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 21 October 2013
A lovely poem of the famous Lady. Very beautiful.
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