The Stream And Me Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

The Stream And Me

Rating: 5.0


Around me darkness falls
Slowly like a silent dream
Sitting on a stone I can hear
The whisper of the stream

Passing by the thick groove
At the edge of the land
Tarries a while to whisper a
Song like my true friend

I watch it going away from
Me to a destination unknown
Near me it sings with pride
Above its banks it has grown

In a trickle it starts its journey
Winning its way through plains
And valleys and rugged lands
Filling up furrows and drains

Alas! Its days are numbered
Too and it is drawn to its end
Now I am proud to be young
But I have to follow my friend

Friday, October 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 30 March 2020

So beautiful and soothing to soul. Nature's beauty never fails to uplift our spirit and calm our agitations.

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Susan Williams 29 October 2018

Beautiful both in the physical sense and the metaphorical sense- - - - - exceedingly well written! 19+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2018

Thanks for rating so high. Honored. My regards.

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Sekharan Pookkat 26 October 2018

whisper of a stream the darkness in a dream and the musings of a heart ends the journey of a cart.!

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2018

That is very nice stanza. Loved it. Thanks very much.

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Dave Walker 26 October 2018

The stream of life, a great poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2018

It goes on whether one likes it or not. Thanks Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2018

Like silent dream darkness falls but you wait for light. You have to follow your friend. Like birth death is truth. This poem is emotional poem. An amazing poem is excellently penned.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2018

That is true Sir. Thanks for positive review of my poem.

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