## The Sun's Plea Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## The Sun's Plea

Rating: 2.8


you go all places
you worship so many
why don't you even look up at me

in a long queue
you would stand
for hours and days
you would wait
to see a golden statue and pray

if you are overwhelmned with gold
iam all gold
why don't you see

as you are all alive
coz of me
i too draw my
love from all of you
don't you know that

atleast from now
look up at me
let me have the love from you

LOOK AT ME
THE SUN'S PLEA

[many a busy days we spend without looking up]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

'atleast from now look up at me let me have the love from you' This is a lovely poem on the sun's plea. Love with 10+

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

very brilliant thoughts..i love this... so sweet is the sun's plea...very humble..yet striking the way you choose your words are so tender... gentle plea of the sun who lights us every single day... really a brilliant idea, Sam...intelligible write... 10+++ l♥ vel♥ ots, maia

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Smiley Hooker 03 June 2009

i don't want the sun to beg on me, i'm waiting for its precious golden shine everyday. this is a lovely and cleaver write, dear poet! 10: -)

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Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Nice thoughts on the sun...well expressed.10

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Indira Babbellapati 04 June 2009

much taken for granted sun in a tropical country like ours...

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Pandian Angelina 18 June 2009

Dear friend, I've uploaded my comment below as 'On reading A Sun’s Plea by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan & Premji’s comment'. Thanks for the inspiration, to you and Prem. Angel

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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

I love God. I love nature. So, this is also my plea. Very nice poem: -)

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Pandian Angelina 15 June 2009

Giver of life Yet cursed On Dog Days Scorching Sun We easily say, Can we do without it, Even for a day? Looked up to Maybe Only on Pongal day! Prem is right Sunrise & Sunsets Daily paintings By it's creator God In tribute to Sun! Angel

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premji premji 13 June 2009

dear samy, this poem is an eyeopener... the best scene of any one's life is the sunrise and set...........

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this my friend.. reminded me to pray

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