I watched intently
The setting sun's dying rays
Glistened off the hill.
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I read Kostas' Now the sun can rise', and now yours, The Sunset, a Haiku that takes you to a sunset yon of the hill. Beautiful.
Moments of the setting sun so beautifully captured here! .. Again with ever such moving feelings! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Beautiful imagery! I am someone who gets excited during a sunrise or sunset and every other day I take photos in my phone to keep those memories alive :)
sun's dying rays Glistened off the hill. even in the death, the rays glisten and gives beauty to the hill and to you who observe it. tony
A wonderful poem that drags me to read it again and again!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your words carry us to the scene and we participate in the feeling. Only the great can do that!