The Sunset Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
The Sunset
Scarlet sunny hands
Surfing soft the sky azure
Turns her face lilac!
Jan 1st 2020
A Most Beautiful Haiku, a loveliest metaphored brevity. Coincidentally I am a paintress too, so I know much about colours, and that's why I look tad different upon your excellent Haiku.Scarlet sunny hands, WOW! And that Azure sky turns her face lilac. Sunset is like leaving the earth and to come again the morrow. Very romantic brevity. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Most enjoyed this parting scene. True romantic must I admit.
Happy to know you a painter poet. HE is both and romantic and much more. We must be grateful to Him for whatever His blessings. Beautiful words yours
Beautiful imagery. I wish you through more light on metaphorical aspect of the write to help me understand the haiku in full zest sir.
Thanks for your read and for your good words Queeny. Thanks for your inquisitiveness as well
In the haiku imagery, the sun and the sky represent the lovers symbolically. The sun disappears leaving the sky behind. The sky goes dark as the night arrives, the darkness being the symbol of parting grief.
It is a lovers' parting scene. Though the parting there is temporary. The female feels sad, goes blue at the thought of parting (Azure sky) . The male consoles her with his loving caressing touch (sunny hand) whereupon she becomes happy goes pink. The resultant face color lilac!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I have come back to leave a suitable message for you: Leaving 2019 and watching how most beautiful this New Year 2020 will give us and the many Blessings in Abundance. I wish you and your beloved family: A Happy 2020 and more Blessings in these coming months. The glow of sunset associates us all with the most beautiful colours a Sunset constantly gives.Scarlet most beautiful red, azure sky and the sensitive colour of lilac. Mesmerizing, Kesav!
Immense thanks for your honest affectionate colorful words Sylvie. A most Happy Year ahead I also wish you back