Mihaela Pirjol

The Touch Of Love (Senryu) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

a pure young heart forms
from a quick drop of water

Topic(s) of this poem: love, symbolism

Form: Senryu

Comments about The Touch Of Love (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Mihaela Pirjol (9/29/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    Thank you, Mr. Brick.
    The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) .

    To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol
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  • Daniel Brick (9/29/2014 5:22:00 AM)

    Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2014 4:48:00 AM)

    Remarkable Haiku, nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    Amazing...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/20/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Clarity is all that matters and you have it poetess, nice job! (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Burkett (8/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 26, 2017

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