The Unusual Hostage Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

The Unusual Hostage

Rating: 5.0


I do not wish to think,
as though all was
beautiful a dream,
and You, my fine Museget, -
the voluntary hostage
ruthless of impatience
and a gossip of the moon...

25/04/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 April 2008

the unusual write is usually meaningful and nice to read.

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Benson Muthoka 28 April 2008

Short, sweet and very meaningful! thanx

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Abha Sharma 28 April 2008

what a unique way to imagine the expression of poetry....the unusual soon becomes soul soothing as is this one....

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Roland Bastien 28 April 2008

ruthless of impatience and a gossip of the moon -------------- He is an unusual hostage- he seems to be there to shape phenomenon forms over the moon ashes and waves. Illusions will colapse at the time he injects Sutra into gossip veins.....for at least 500 years, mankind will remember him. Roland.

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Flora Gillingham 01 May 2008

i love the idea of a 'voluntary hostage'. I suppose we all are in our different ways. very affecting poem. Fx

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 May 2008

It's really too obscure for the reader. This harms the message. The kind of thing a poet loves and a reader hates. GW62

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2008

Voluntary hostage! What a luring usage! All poets are unusual voluntary hostages… Tsira, yours this poem makes you a prominent one! A ten!

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Very nice and simply a good flow

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Stone Granite 11 May 2008

Effective in its simplicity. Wonderful peom, thank you for it.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 06 May 2008

Short and sweet poem touching...............I enjoyed

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