Saturday, March 10, 2012

The Wandering Gypsy

Rating: 4.5
The Wandering Gypsy

Looking at the prop roots of Banyan
Immense hold of its territory
Felt like a kicked can
No permanent place to stay
No place to keep as confined identity
I feel myself like the wandering gypsy

Run daily to a new direction
Learn life's truths
Keep false notions as fictions
No place to hold myself
My Life has turned topsy turvy
I only feel myself as the wandering gypsy

Everyday, a new place to be explored
a new commitments to be laid
a new religion to be imbibed
Failing which I've no place to hide
Thrown away like a Frisbee
I'm no less than the wandering gypsy

Life's fashion reached standstill
Luggage bag can't hold the cloth hill
My loved ones shoved away
Communication died on the way
Jumping like an obedient monkey
I feel myself as the wandering gypsy

Unaware of my final destination
Life turned into a unique animation
Cry to god to curtail this journey
Transform me to a settled man
Seems I'm burning my skin
Rather getting tanned
As it's just the beginning of the long journey
Need to run for long as the wandering gypsy
Freespirit Juneja
Freespirit Juneja
Topic(s) of this poem: life
It's about the continuous journey of man's life and his quest for stability
Fico Espiritu 20 September 2012
A good poem. Very nice comparison.
1 0 Reply
Kayode Orogbemi 09 May 2012
Ur poem was gud bro...only dat it dearths figures of speech and mostly its realy poetic..kip d lyts on. i love it.
1 0 Reply
Yosra Baidi 03 May 2012
welll it's not complement but i'm speechless this poem is very expressive, it anouces the inner of the poet as aimless or lost in the road where no guide is there to follow and reach his goal, this reminds me of a novel i read entiteled the sun also rises by Earnest hemingway in which the major theme is LOSS refering to the Lost Generation, and i like most the metaphores used such as the wandering gypsy and others, this concerning to component, on the other hand, i want to comment on the form which is free versed poem but it contains certain regularity and musical devices and that's what i liked most cause i felt as if reading a lyrical poem. thank you for messaging me. hope you keep me up dated with your news and i hpe also that you have a look at my poems
1 0 Reply
Guess Who 01 May 2012
Nice poem nicely expressed i love it .......... Good luck with your poems Guess WWho
1 0 Reply
Marissa Ford 25 April 2012
Loved it! ! I totally feel it! ! i even feel like this sometimes.
1 0 Reply
Romeo Della Valle 23 April 2012
Excellent! I identify with your journey 100% but in my case it was only a dream that vanished after I woke up! In many ways, I feel like that here in New York City! This a great and well penned write that clearly makes the readers think deeply and compare their own situations to this well described story which is touching! I really like it! 10+++ Your poetic talent will take you to the top of the Poetry World one day! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
1 0 Reply
Steven Drake 23 April 2012
Read your poem. Feels like running into walls. Wondering where one should belong? When life isn't always in presence of your song. Especially when your heart aches. And friends seem to be all gone! Running away from the pain that hits you between the eyes. Survival in faith beyond disguise. Rights of passageway's bounty on soul. When I write I learn more about myself and the world that I don't always feel that I belong to. I painted an abstract painting of a banyan tree. It's on my web sight. Such an interesting sacred tree. Help bring out the nature of us human beings. Thanks for inviting me to read your poem. I enjoyed it. Keep on writing and contact me in the future. It's nice to know other writers to be able to relate to. Steven Drake
1 0 Reply
Serena Taylor 23 April 2012
A really nice poem :)
1 0 Reply
Rebecca .C. 23 April 2012
amazing poem...i understood it and liked it a i cant explain it. It was really good though. well done.
2 0 Reply
Ari Lucas 23 April 2012
j'adore! ! il y a tres Émotion...j'adore monsieur[3
2 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

1/21/2021 7:10:30 AM #