The Yellow Poncho Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

The Yellow Poncho

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isn't it strange that many years ago,
a dainty lass wore a yellow poncho,
and twirled around in her garden like a golden butterfly,
a little boy watched her...couldn't erase the memory the rest of his life!

years and years passed by!
the breathtaking garden lost its lustre!
golden Marigold and white chrysanthemums flowered,
red roses and hazel-coloured zinnias blossomed,
but the swing was vacant,
no one heard the laughter, the chatter, and the melliflous birds didn't chirp there any more!

the yellow poncho was worn out, and faded away,
didn't look gorgeous any more to her,
something to get rid of,
and finally that's what happened!
the poncho got replaced by a stylish attire!

the memory did not fade away for someone else,
who thought, it was an enchanting angel
who he found,
the angel didn't have wings to fly, but
had a yellow cloak!

You remembered the yellow poncho,
and I did not! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2019

A very enchanting story. A vivid portrayal of love that is so magical. Beautifully written. Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2020

Loved it.. appreciated.. clear 10 Great changes Sunday,9th August 2020 I don't know whether it is good or bad but it has led me to believe that originality has been lost a great loss at the cost of humanity Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 August 2019

What a lovely narrative! and penned so well, a lovely poem overall.

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Really appreciate your valuable comments!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2019

'Like a golden butterfly'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you, Dear Friend! Delighted to share!

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Ratan Ghosh 04 August 2019

A beautiful poem, touches the heart

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Appreciate your encouraging comments!

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Leeann Azzopardi 04 August 2019

a great poem of love lost and eternal longing

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Appreciate your inspiring comment!

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