M. Asim Nehal

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They Say – Love Is….. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They say love is magic,
then why I am superstitious!

They say love is patient,
then why I am impatient and nervous!

They say love is brave,
then why I am afraid!

They say love is blind,
then why I am judgmental!

They say love is trust,
then why I suspect!

They say love is unconditional,
then why I fell conditioned!

They say love heals,
then why I feel hurt!

They say love forgives,
then why I am blamed!

Is something wrong with me or
Love is untrue.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Couplet

Comments about They Say – Love Is….. by M. Asim Nehal

  • Bharati Nayak (9/25/2015 1:06:00 AM)

    Under the magic spell of love all the true lovers go through this stage.They ask the questions you ask yourself.Love is an enigma.Perhaps it is beyond human comprehension to know why such contradictory feelings come when one knows his feelings are true. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/19/2015 7:32:00 AM)

    So nice poem...19

    If someone refuses for reasons
    One should not take it personally
    You may be loving passionately
    But not admitting tentatively

    You may have many excuses
    And refuse
    Other’s angle
    But it differs from an individual to individual
    (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/17/2015 1:07:00 PM)

    A good depiction in a comparative style. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/14/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    Love is not untrue and this is amazingly magic on expression and feeling as you have shared in poem. Fantastic sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/14/2015 12:39:00 PM)

    Neither you are wrong nor your love is untrue, fleeting of mind is a part of our thoughts. You have nicely described this fleeting of mind, a great poem.....................10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 1:57:00 PM)

    Thanks a lot for nice comments.

  • (9/14/2015 10:02:00 AM)

    Outstanding Contradictory poem..unconventional and intriguing............Brilliant work of Mr. Asim. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 12:26:00 PM)

    Thank u Mr. T Rajan. I like and admire your comments and blessings.

  • David Wood (9/14/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    As the song says, 'love is a many splendid thing, ' once you have it you have to treasure it. Lovely poem Mohammed (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 6:48:00 AM)

    Thanks much, I appreciate your comments David.

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/14/2015 1:51:00 AM)

    Amazing.. the contrast ideas you have showed here just made me speechless. Though each line denies the other one, but a reader has to agree with both of them. outstanding vision. loved it. this is beyond any rating. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 4:45:00 AM)

    I am so happy that u liked it.........Thanks much for review and nice analysis, I admire.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2015

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