This Sea Of You Poem by Crimson Love

This Sea Of You

Rating: 5.0


Pull me under your sea,
I'm drowing,
There is no hand to pull me from your waters,
I'm under the waves of your emotion,
forever weighed down by your words,
I sink to the ocean floor,
I see your distorted reflection,
My lungs fill with water, my last sight is you,
A perfect death, perhaps just a perfect beginning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 16 October 2011

Special form than your usual writing, it's amazing work Crimson...A Crimson Sea maybe hahaha :) Nice! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Jacqui Broad 15 October 2011

I think I see. I interpret this as someone crying over a break-up, but the end may also mean the beginning of something perfect, yes?

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Stefanie Fontker 15 October 2011

Lovely. We all long to drown in the heart of the ones we love the most.

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Dave Walker 15 October 2011

Really like this. A new life from death. A really great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Back in time.

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