This Was Not True Poem by ANJALI SINHA

This Was Not True

Rating: 4.8


Why say I love you,
When you really don’t care,
Why say hello,
When you really mean goodbye.

Don’t tell me your feelings,
Did you ever have them,
Why hold my hand gently,
When you meant to crush my heart.

Don’t write me poetry,
It was meant for another,
Don’t look into my eyes,
Coz it was always lies.

Why do you say---
I was “going to---“
When you never meant to start,
Now promise me,
You’ll be true,
Tell me all this was not true.


14-07-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 10 May 2009

hmmmm soooo romantic and sweeeeet poem...lala.....intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul... hope you do one page about my peace willing thoughts and dreams..... a note if you being a good friend wish to be beside in my 7th new books...it; s titel as THE PACE WISHER.... all about my love based peace critiques... [email protected].... yours afzal shauq

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Muhammad Ali 04 May 2009

When emotions would breath! ! ! A power poem Anjali...... it is really You! ! great work..10

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Mahfooz Ali 15 March 2009

---------------------------- Why say I love you, When you really don’t care, Why say hello, When you really mean goodbye. Don’t tell me your feelings, Did you ever have them, Why hold my hand gently, When you meant to crush my heart. Don’t write me poetry, It was meant for another, Don’t look into my eyes, Coz it was always lies. Why do you say- I was “going to-“ When you never meant to start, Now promise me, You’ll be true, Tell me all this was not true. ----------------------------- beautiful poem...............

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Ridge Cahill 31 January 2009

Strong and pointed, a wonderful write of a woman taking control of her life and demanding answers. Loved it.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 December 2008

that would make the opponent look within - anice attitude there-10

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Incerdably inductive. Excellent ending! Well done my friend.10+++

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Amrit Rathi 23 May 2010

A sweet little poem full of the feelings for the beloved! Remarkable simplicity stands out.10+

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Delicate Heart 26 November 2009

nice piece it has really touched my heart................10 out of 10

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Ken E Hall 17 October 2009

You see smoke with no fire I hope, watch his eyes when he tells you his story if they twitch write him off with another great poem like this+++++++10 regards

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

hi anju another smasher u have tucked in here... beauty simple...very touching and romantic..nth its surely a tenner cheers

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