Those Eyes- A Valentine Dedication Poem by Valsa George
Those Eyes- A Valentine Dedication
I saw....
Two black crystal balls
Rimmed with white
Reflecting an indefinable emotion
Glowing with some intense passion
Riveting
Entrancing!
Two eyes of oceanic depths
Relaying the most intimate message
"I love you" (?)
So piercing were those eyes
That I couldn't stand their electric glare
From those eyes, rose the Promethean fire
Glistening like molten gold
At once sending out
The light of a hundred galaxies
From the fire bursting through those eyes
My body was turned into a conflagration
And my soul rippled like fermented wine
An ocean was stirring within
Whose whirls could never again be tamed
In those flooding pools
Let me cast my fishing net!
With this, I am planning to take a short break.
From the beginning I appreciate the title of the poem 'Those Eyes-A...' as there is abyss relation among eyes and love that you have inscribed here hauntingly and astutely.Let it be quoted... Two eyes of oceanic depths Relaying the most intimate message I love you (?) It is your 700th poem as a remarkable one in a dedication to valentine day of lovers. Thanks so much.
Congratulations for this milestone and your happiness. your poem is beautiful and I think very similar is my poem 'eyes white holes'. I Gabe this reference because of your humble comment. Dear I think your inability is worth wisdom than my ability.
Thank you Muhammad! The same ideas can sometime strike poets who think on similar lines! I feel humbled by your humility.....!
Congrats Valsa though its late to wish you on 700th collection. Beautiful write as usual from your pen. loved it.
Thank you so much Geetha! Though late, a wish is a wish and I accept it with gratitude! Nice to see you after a fairly long interval!
Valsa always writes a wonderful poem on a Valentine day. Congrats for writing your 700th poem.
I love this enchanting and romantic write with inspired lines that are breathtaking in the beauty of your words that are so memorable, a classic love poem so exquisite! Congratulations on your 700th poem Valsa, I really enjoy reading your brilliant poems with best wishes!
Thank you Hazel for your wonderful response to my 700th poem! For me it is a milestone and your feed back is much appreciated on this occasion!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 7:28:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Passion, love, desire, and compassion all blended together in a perfect way. This is a fantastic way to celebrate, to dedicate, Valentine's Day. Well done, Valsa.