Though, They Had Many Arrows In Their Quiver. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Though, They Had Many Arrows In Their Quiver.

Rating: 5.0


I left a burning lamp of love at a place,
Where I thought there was no love.

Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet,
Yet what was lacking was human touch.

Though, beauty was spread all over there,
Everyone was seeing yet insight was missing.

Though, all hearts were feeling the pain of separation,
Yet what was lacking was sincere crying eyes.

Though, they had many arrows in their quiver,
Friends are plenty around yet enemies are very less.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2021

Excellent metaphoric poem, when there is no insight, though intellectuals are present, there is missing something most important, a very thought-provoking poem, true poetically rendered, hope your lamp of love have lighted most of them,5 stars!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 February 2021

A good poem. Thank for the translation.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 22 February 2021

Blown...Though, all hearts were feeling the pain of separation, Yet what was lacking was sincere crying eyes.

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Michael Jack 27 February 2021

Brilliant..Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet, Yet what was lacking was human touch.

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Suzon Albert 24 February 2021

Superb Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet, Yet what was lacking was human touch.

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2021

Amusing poem. Little things makes all the difference. Though, beauty was spread all over there, Everyone was seeing yet insight was missing.

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Shreya Hacks 23 February 2021

Every verse is unique and wonderful.

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 February 2021

Winning hearts is an art which we do not find now a days.. with many friend and no enemy is a dream...

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