It is a thought
That we are born,
It is in thoughts,
We feel forlorn,
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Thoughts are the core of our being and you have flowed thru the poem with true reality, thanks for the read regards uavaniceday
Our thoughts taught us to be what we are now-the good, the bad and the ugly.Fantastic writes Sharma.
Everything that happens to us perhaps depends on what thoughts we remain engrossed with and we transcend ourselves when we start controlling our thoughts. But as poets we most often let thoughts astray and allow them to pull us along...
think of the thought that ease our minds think it positively and develope more signs signs of good thoughts where everybody finds in the hearts, soul and mind in every mankind..naizz
I'm happy to report, I read, your every thought! They can bring you peace, or make you sad. Just keep in mind, leave the bad thoughts, behind and you'll end up, feeling glad!
Your nice poem reveals the fact that thoughts make us what we are and thoughts of Nature make us broad, bold and successful in life! Fine!
Our thoughts can make us sad or happy, but study nature with an open heart and it will always return joy. Lovely write
the flower, the thorn init, river and its musical dance, the sun related to the thought''the poem flows smoothly...lovely write sir
You have linked thoughts to the beauty of nature....a delightful write CP...10+
you make the flowers bloom with each line lived the hyacinth of beautiful spring, never been touch by human favor, but taste of harmony of thoughts had linger in our hearts.....the essence of time rediscovered in your poem....thank you for sharing....God bless....a 10++++++++
Lovely this poem, consciousness of thought, true in every way Life follows thought......10+ Best Wishes, Linda
What a lovely descriptive piece. I love your thoughts about flowers and the river. Pure enchantment. Warm regards, Sandra
Dear Sharmaji, It's a nice poem, the philosophy behind is unique. Should we say as you sow so you reap? or as you dream so you beam? your linking of thoughts to flowers or thorns and rivers is nicely done and keep the space open for further analysis by the readers.. I liked the poem and a-10 from my side-Rajkumar