Sometimes our thoughts
Pass like geese
Flying in tandem
Some perch in the mind
Cling as a leech
Sucking your sanity
Still others visit
From time to time
And tingle the mind.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
So beautiful this poems on thoughts, that come and go. A mystery we can't let go, But that is so fulfilling, like this lovely poem, that with such deep inspiration, you have gifted us with. Your poems and your person are such unforgettable, bliss.
thought provoking sometimes thought comes as savior, sometimes comes as destroyer!
Beautiful presentation of thoughts swimming in our mind like tides in an ocean along with their life spans and other specifications, in the poetic expression. Thanks for sharing.
Most accurate observation! Magnificent contemplation... admired
Beautifully expressed. Striking analogy you bring in your words.5 stars
Fabulous poem on thoughts. I love your comparison with geese and leech. How they perch on your mind and cling on as a leech. Enjoyed reading this unique poem on thoughts, dear Rose.
Rose Marie a beautifully written poem presenting a new line of thought and very poetic expressed way, when addressing our thought gathering processes. Wonderfully unique and a real joy to read and always of interest when one delivers there own thoughts on the matter. Five worthy stars and while I'm thinking about it a hearty big thank you too. Take care Rose Marie and simply enjoy life.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well penned composition. Truly splendid and brilliant.....5 stars *****