Thoughts... Poem by Patricia Gale

Thoughts...

Rating: 5.0


It is not the full moon that frightens me
Nor the darkness
Strong northern breezes that whirl
Nor the quiet of the night

Tis the face I see each eve as I close my eyes and dream
A face like a yon’ lighthouse’s beam

Angel eyes shinning in my slumber
Soft tender lips that make my heart burn bright
Drawing me closer caught within the beauty of your touch
I fall beneath your spell… lost without human sight
We dance upon billowing white clouds…. Time fades away
The enhancement ends and the sun streams upon my bed

Frightened only by the thought of you…
When my eyes awaken and I find…
My beloved not at my side…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 26 October 2007

Soft tender lips that make my heart burn bright Drawing me closer caught within the beauty of your touch...........................love yet scintillating as heart burns brightbut seems to be cowered by the reason of breezes whirling..........real ecstasy....i love it, thanks for shairing

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Original Unknown Girl 24 October 2007

Gorgeous penning here Patricia. Really enjoyed it and the concept behind it. I can understand how afraid you must be to open your eyes when you've lived such a fantastical love in the deep of the night.... Beautiful and image-rich. HG: -) xx

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Ph... I SO know this feeling... the fear of desertion or loss is perhaps the heaviest fear of all. Finely scribed P. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 October 2007

This is just wonderful romantic thoughts, your love is a lucky man to hold such love...10

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Marvin Brato 24 October 2007

What a romantic thoughts for a dearest beloved! Thanks for sharing, loved it! Top marks.

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