reading your self-aggrandizing scribblings
i realize that even though
your ego is the size of a planet
there might, just might, be somebody in there
here's hoping you find her some day
Is this a giant gas planet perchance? A generous thought at heart in a very disciplined package! ! What was it that Connor McLeod of the Clan McLeod, of Glenfinnan born in 1514 approximately, famously said, several times? You help keep it spinning Cia. This kind of stuff brings PH to life. Thanks, jim.
I love the way Cia get's her point accross in a wonderfully powerful, subtle way. It speaks volumes Cia, as do all of your poems. Who says you need afour page poems to get your point accross? ! Ashley
That would assume she is not too preoccupied with the outside, to bother looking in! Nice work Cia. Danny; ¬)
i dont know who..... but i agree most strongly! nice one cia.
Elvis Presley may have had you in mind, when recording 'Don't Be Cruel To A Heart That's True.' I do believe 'poetry is the window to the soul, ' regardless how obnoxious! That said, 'To A Certain Poetess' is absolutely brilliant.
that ego happens to happen just lying flat by that day...........supeb poem, as i admire by ur imagery as luscious yet, great write,10/10, thanks for sharing
Like the touch of compassion in this acerbic critique. Truth penned with economy and a quiet brilliance. Excellent piece. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Although it's been a few hectic days, now in the past...I do believe there's a tad of good in everyone. Maybe just a sliver in some, but it's there. Galaxy-huge egos...now that's a whole different problem. All-in-all? You're certainly right on this one. Big, lovely written, truth. Good! xxElysabeth
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good poem! Good you of language and well written! -Michael