Cia Frizzell


Time - Poem by Cia Frizzell

i took apart a watch
and found, studying the pieces
that time wasn't in there


Comments about Time by Cia Frizzell

  • Adi Cox (7/6/2009 12:43:00 PM)


    Short and sharp, this poem made me laugh. Maybe there is an important point here. That properties change, when we look deeply and take apart on inspection. Excellent 10/10. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (2/10/2008 11:45:00 AM)


    Short

    Simple

    and
    most of all

    Expressive and Great

    loved it

    koni
    (Report) Reply

  • Elysabeth Faslund (6/26/2007 3:44:00 PM)


    this is too cute! ! ! But, it will have you going in circles too. Conundrum.xxElysabeth (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2007 1:42:00 AM)


    i did that once, and a bunch of little springs popped up. I found time, the time i wasted trying to put it back together.
    This is excellent.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2007 5:48:00 PM)


    I love this one. Good read. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2007 4:34:00 PM)


    Cia

    Superb piece....I enjoyed this time with you....thanks


    Love, D.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2007 7:11:00 PM)


    of course it wasn't.
    it's in my head.

    good work, short and sweet.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2007 1:37:00 AM)


    You pen your truth with great economy, Cia. Three fascinating lines of wisdom. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • (3/30/2007 4:54:00 PM)


    Wish I thought of this one
    short & sweet, and has to get
    a smile from anyone that reads it
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2007 10:36:00 PM)


    ...this young lady is not only a fur-king good writer, she's a philosopher to boot (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2007 11:18:00 AM)


    Tempus fugit! ! .... and so must I.. (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2007 10:53:00 AM)


    A grand piece indeed Cia. Very clever and well presented. (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2007 10:44:00 AM)


    yep. like it cia. thats all. al (Report) Reply

Read all 13 comments »

User Rating:
3,7 / 5 ( 10 votes ) 13



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, February 7, 2011


Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]