Cia Frizzell

Time

i took apart a watch
and found, studying the pieces
that time wasn't in there

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007
Poem Edited: Monday, February 7, 2011

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  • Adi CoxAdi Cox (7/6/2009 12:43:00 PM)

    Short and sharp, this poem made me laugh. Maybe there is an important point here. That properties change, when we look deeply and take apart on inspection. Excellent 10/10.

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  • Konjit Berhane (2/10/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    Short

    Simple

    and
    most of all

    Expressive and Great

    loved it

    koni

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  • Elysabeth FaslundElysabeth Faslund (6/26/2007 3:44:00 PM)

    this is too cute! ! ! But, it will have you going in circles too. Conundrum.xxElysabeth

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  • Chris Mendros (5/8/2007 1:42:00 AM)

    i did that once, and a bunch of little springs popped up. I found time, the time i wasted trying to put it back together.
    This is excellent.

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  • Cellar Door (4/23/2007 5:48:00 PM)

    I love this one. Good read.

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  • gone gone (4/5/2007 4:34:00 PM)

    Cia

    Superb piece....I enjoyed this time with you....thanks


    Love, D.

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  • Anastacia Podarevska (4/4/2007 7:11:00 PM)

    of course it wasn't.
    it's in my head.

    good work, short and sweet.

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  • Alison Cassidy (4/4/2007 1:37:00 AM)

    You pen your truth with great economy, Cia. Three fascinating lines of wisdom. love, Allie xxxx

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  • fanniesson - (3/30/2007 4:54:00 PM)

    Wish I thought of this one
    short & sweet, and has to get
    a smile from anyone that reads it

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  • Jerry Hughes (3/27/2007 10:36:00 PM)

    ...this young lady is not only a fur-king good writer, she's a philosopher to boot

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  • Frank Cannon (3/27/2007 11:18:00 AM)

    Tempus fugit! ! .... and so must I..

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  • Declan McHenry (3/27/2007 10:53:00 AM)

    A grand piece indeed Cia. Very clever and well presented.

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  • alice sunderland (3/27/2007 10:44:00 AM)

    yep. like it cia. thats all. al

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