Time Poem by Cia Frizzell

Time

Rating: 3.7


i took apart a watch
and found, studying the pieces
that time wasn't in there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alice sunderland 27 March 2007

yep. like it cia. thats all. al

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Declan McHenry 27 March 2007

A grand piece indeed Cia. Very clever and well presented.

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Frank Cannon 27 March 2007

Tempus fugit! ! .... and so must I..

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Jerry Hughes 27 March 2007

...this young lady is not only a fur-king good writer, she's a philosopher to boot

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fanniesson - 30 March 2007

Wish I thought of this one short & sweet, and has to get a smile from anyone that reads it

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Adi Cox 06 July 2009

Short and sharp, this poem made me laugh. Maybe there is an important point here. That properties change, when we look deeply and take apart on inspection. Excellent 10/10.

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Konjit Berhane 10 February 2008

Short Simple and most of all Expressive and Great loved it koni

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Elysabeth Faslund 26 June 2007

this is too cute! ! ! But, it will have you going in circles too. Conundrum.xxElysabeth

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Chris Mendros 08 May 2007

i did that once, and a bunch of little springs popped up. I found time, the time i wasted trying to put it back together. This is excellent.

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Cellar Door 23 April 2007

I love this one. Good read.

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