Tears shed secret
Known lone to mind
Eyes dry prevent
Ready to lie, pretend to smile
You fail to read the pains
In my feel- no-fault yours
None- face reveals
You come to tell me
You must leave
To bid farewell all for life
Let me redeem console my mind
Sweeten my words to wish you bye
But inside, inside me I wish
To tell you these-
You love! Please leave
And linger not in memories mine
Take away all those dreams unripe
Disowned I held in the heart on lease
No place on my own,
Now to store them sweet…
14 08 08
hearts....are to love and be loved....dont question every beat of it, , hearts dont lie...this piece is really good..thanks for making it nice..CHEERS..
y sweeten the words if they mean inseparable sadness...n the mask u put...often is too opaque even for ur dearest ones....its not their fault but the grace of ur deception...fueled by the quest to see no tear in thier eyes even if it means killing urs befor they were born...hop i got wat u intended..
so similar.......wanting to be with some one so much it tears the, apart but when its time to let go and move on we are forced to bury that lingering sense that make them cry.....it's hard touching poem kesav i really enjoyed this one have a happy new year
another beautiful poem, shows how much one can want another but at the same time when its over and time to go its easier to try to forget everything thats happened and the love that was once shared, great write
i love the way that you used deep word i like it ver much its awesome
cry for not my presence but my loose of love leaves you to the pain..... what a sweeten words that hold every feeling to say good bye..... ....i like you poem to ponder....it makes me strong.....thank you...God bless...10/10
really splendidly written.. Eyes dry prevent Ready to lie; pretend to smile; You fail to read the pains In my feel; no fault yours liked the lines very much
your right i did love it its pretty good on how you used your words it gave me a clear image
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
really a beautiful, great piece and it is also true in reality....eyes don't lie..(though lips maybe smiling) ......really a striking one...and quite a very inspiring piece......thanks for making this sir....