To My Beloved Mother Dear.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

To My Beloved Mother Dear....

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To my beloved Mother dear....

Let's start
this morning we love
with a heart full of love signs

My Mother Dear is well acquainted with war episodes
eventhough long after the war periodes

I'm always still sad
if I mention she
my heart splits grievous, truly

Since long I have no haven anymore
waiting till the heavy rains do subside,
where must I do that?

Why did you hasten, Mother dear?
(death of own beloved Mother always comes too quick)

Dear God Abba Father, why did Thou call Mother dear so quickest?


affectionately,

Sylvie

P.S.
This message I send as rapidest as the Lightning to Paradise....

(this translation from the Indonesian Language is once again subtile corrected so that it reaches as the best the original language)

This is a translation of the poem Kepada Bundaku Tercinta.... by Sylvia Frances Chan
Thursday, July 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: messages,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Since long I have no haven

waiting till the heavy rains do subside

Why did you hasten, Mother dear?

Dear God Abba Father, why did Thou call Mother dear so quickest?


affectionately,

Sylvie

P.S.
This message I send as the rapidest as the Lightning to Paradise....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

A heart full of love! ! ! ! ! 🤗💖💡📚🎓🎶🎼💃 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 16 July 2019

Whenever we think of our dear parents who have left us to their heavenly abode, we are filled with sadness. The one question that plagues us is " Why did God call them so quick" ! We have no answer! God will have His own plans. Let us keep the loving memories of them in our hearts and believe that they enjoy eternal bliss in Heaven! Your love for your mother is deeply felt in these lines.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 July 2020

Dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, I want to tell you how sweetest are your words as I can read in your precious response. BUT sadness of a daughter, no matter the age, is a constant returning greatest sad and emotive feelings thus a constant experiencing anew that greatest sad moment that ever was and had been in her life. I know you meant the best with your precious comment and I am grateful for that. God Blesses in abundance you and your beloved épousse.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2020

To dear Valsa George, thank you so much for your supporting and kindest respond.. I appreciate very much your precious words and visit to my poem site. I regard this poem very precious since it is about my dearest mother. I am touchedvery much by your friendliest words. God Bless you, dear Valsa.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2020

Dear Edward, thank you so much for your warm comment and kindest compliment. I am happy that you have been here to read this poem. That means a very lot to me.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 July 2019

A poignant and very touching poem. For me, a mother is the heart of a family. And if she is gone, a part of our heart always goes with her. No one could ever replace our mother. And life will never be the same again without her. A heartfelt write that brought tears to my eyes. May this poem, in one way or another, lighten the heavy feelings you felt. Simple and.short but laden with the deepest emotions for a beloved mother.

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(2) Your ardent comments are of such great consolation. Luckiest I am there is still poetry and ye. Thank you so much for the precious comprehended emotive senses I had. God be with thee.

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As I have read your most beautiful crystal-clear remarks, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, my eyes have become moist again, but life is so, constant great bliss, and this gold medal has two sides, it goes hand in hand as in the country of the beloved, a little problem to comprehend, your remark is of

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2019

When a daughter writes an affectionate messafe to a mother through a poem this touches heart and brings emotion. the Lightning is sent o Paradise beautifully. You are waiting for her since long and it is raining outside. This is an excellent poem of the filial love. Thank you for penning this beautiful poem...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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